Just a suggestion. Remember it is your book, all suggestions can be taken or not. The only thing I would suggest is that even alien kings can act medieval like in Star Wars.
That being said. Follow your own thoughts. They are what will make the story special.
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Important Post
Spongebob is awesome and I dont think they could make any better yellow, talking sponge. I just love that show too death and its not immature too like cartoons that are cute just because some people may think it is. If you like something than go for it, dont let anyone change your choice.
(ESPECIALLY ABOUT SPONGEBOB)