BookRix

the book is great i recommended to everyone

i don't know what about this book but i just coun't stop

I love how you can pick up on the family members in these stories.

I didn't anticipate where this was going. I liked how you worked in those sword strokes.

I really enjoyed this. Definitely right up my alley when it comes to choice of reading material. The writing was very good, the characters developed and 3D. I had no trouble envisioning the scenes. You surely earned a vote. Thanks for the good read.
A couple line edits for you.
>He mentioned something about preparing for the Blood Moon, . . . What's up with that? "It happens close to Halloween this year, Jon." Mel explained, "It's a great full moon for working curses." Jon wanted to talk to his Dad, but . . . man sized silhouettes < man-sized needs a hyphen.
That's about it. I enjoyed. If you have a spare minute I also have a story up in family contest called Nana's Love. I'd love to hear what you have to say. Any voting is optional. :-)

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story writing contest "Family Stories".

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