Haunted

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Haunted
They say that when you die, your whole life repeats. At least, it seems that way. From the moment you were born to the moment you utter your last breath, everything you experienced flashes before you like a movie. Well, I can tell you that it doesn’t. Death is a nightmare; all your failures, all your misery, everything you ever did wrong tumbles back down on you like an avalanche, crushing you, smothering you. Killing you. But the worst thing of all? The real pain starts after you’re already dead.

Alyssa MacDonnell is a typical 16 year old girl, trying to navigate the minefields of highschool and dating with her sanity still intact. When tragedy strikes, how will she cope with coming to terms with a new and different world?

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tj.gonzales

Wow you got it just right!. Very intense and left me wanting more. More, more, more. Let me know when you have the next chapter......

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Jay Babee

Aww thank you so much!! You make me blush (≧◡≦)

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XxxPerfect101xxX

Normally I'm not one to read 'ghost' stories. But I honestly found this one quite interesting, I love the whole situation and mystery of the story. Your a natural born writer, the way you describe what your character is going through puts your readers in her shoes as well. It's truly amazing, I hope you can continue though. I can see that you have many readers and fans of your books which could go well to your advantage :) I... Show more

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Jay Babee

Aww thank you!! (≧◡≦)
This comment seriously made me smile so much

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Deleted User

Why did you stop? It was getting so good!

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Jay Babee

Gotta have a cliffhanger in there every now and then! Haha =)

Deleted User

Nooooooo!!!

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Light_Ark

GUHH!!! I want to read more!! This story is so amazing! It's Ghost Whisperer all over again and I'm loving it! KMP!!! >XD

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Jay Babee

Hehe thankyou!! ^‿^

Light_Ark

Love the twist!! Please keep the chaps coming!!!!

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tj.gonzales

Okay Girl! Just finished reading the updates and You have a winner! Flows great together and makes me feel it is a new mix of "Ghost". Of course I loved "Ghost" and I love your update...

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Jay Babee

Yaaaay that was what I was going for =D

tj.gonzales

U go girl....

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Deleted User

Oh wow. I just read the updated chapter, and I love it! Please keep me posted on updates like this. It's really good.

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Jay Babee

Thank you so much!! Will do <3

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