BookRix

This seems to be a continuation of The Adventure at Hancock. I see a delightful story written from a fresh new perspective. It's fun to read. Now comes that inevitable but. I found a few spots where the tenses did not agree. In other words you changed from past tense to present and vise versa in some sentences (or possibly within the paragraph). Also sometimes you failed to use the plural when it was called for. Without doing a complete edit it is only a minor distraction when reading since your sentence structure, spelling and paragraph structure are well done. Keep up the story writing, I think you have a talent for it.