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nice it is just 15 words

zxsarah,

This short short 15 word story is very chilling, powerful, and a sad nightmare.

Excellent writing!

Was a shocker. A little much, disturbng, but you definently got the emotion in those few words

It made me feel nauseous. If 15 words can do that, then you've got my vote, girl.

And may i just say. You've presented it with a beginning, a middle and an end and there are no superfluous words in there.
that's what it's all about.

Way to go, Sara.
xx

I've never really written anything before so I figured that this contest was a test for me. Thank you all for your support with my very first "book". It make me feel good and to try again at something else.

I want to cry. You have encompassed a story of love, loss and grief in 15 short words.

Excellent.

I'm not smiling because of the story. In 15 words it was powerful. A horrific nightmare we all have had.

I'm smiling because with this, your first, you have arrived.
Excellent!

mothers...I hope this was not the case for you.

who doesn't really write, that is one of the most voteworthy entries i've seen.
It's the title that makes it so chilling.

Recalls Hemingway's own six-word short:

"For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn."