BookRix

I could not really get into this book, the grammar was a little off and the characters did not seem to fit well to me. I tried to push through and read it, but, it's kind of frustrating correcting everything in my head while I'm trying to relax and read a short little book online. I'm not trying to be rude or anything just giving my two cents.

No make her come back to life or something!

YOU made me cry y did she have 2 die??plz update and bring her back to life or something!!!:((((((

loved it! so different than anything else I have read before :). Are you going to be writing a sequel? The only thing about this book that I would think about changing is the dates..... the way they act and talk are more like current times than 1800s. Other than that I thought the book was great! keep up the good work and cant wait to read more of you work!

love this story fabulous yes it is.
-mb

hhmmm interesting. Gives a very new curious thinking to death.

The story i liked. But as some said, you need to add more punctuation, especially commas. Apart from that, great story. keep it up.

It's unlike anything I've read (the whole thing about hell having a palace where satan lived n stuff)and I really like it!!!
There are some very small errors, though. It's just small stuff like unproper punctuation and run-on sentences, but I still can't wait to finish the book!
Good Job!!!
Chloe!!!

A few slight changes would make it more amazing then it already is. You have talent. (:

best romeo and juliet type story ever!so sad,happy, and mournful all in one.