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Love it! So good! Couldn't stop reading! Can't wait to see where you go with this :)
I do, however, have some critiques:
You have some punctuation mistakes and tiny errors of the sorts. Make sure your sentences make sense! When the dragon queen died, I didn't know what was going on. I was clueless. I still am... just a little. You need to make sure your sentences make sense and aren't too complicated.
And Steephi seems angry... Show more
I plan to upload the entire book onto here, but it's difficult and time-consuming. I have to re-format the entire thing every time, because of the italics used for the dragon speech. I'm glad you liked it though!
Are you going to update this? I absolutely loved it <3
I was caught immediately. 6 years-old or otherwise, your imagination and world building are stunning.
I'm left hanging, waiting for more of this unique land filled with flying dragons and queen riders:)
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