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Hi Melissa,
I hope you remember me. I have had some time to look back at the chapters you sent me and the comments I made.
I do have some more time now that I can beta again. We can flesh out some of the things I pointed out before and I am willing to work with you on them.
If you are still willing to let me beta for you, you can email me at the same email as before.
Hoping to hear from you.
J-Ann
This was a really good book! I was just wondering on when you planned on writing the second book(If that's what you are going to do) and If I could proof read it as I have seen quite a few spelling mistakes in your books(Although they don't make them unreadable).
Yay, a comment!! Kvistr isn't done yet so Book two (Adurna) won't be in the works for a while. But I do plan on continuing at some point. Right now I'm going to be revising what I have of Kvistr so far, fix all of those grammar mistakes and lengthen the chapters without fixing... Show more
Sure, lol, that sounds great! I will try to do my best to help you with your books! , I actually appreciate you even commenting back :P
great! :) okay, im gonna send you a message so we can continue this via inbox rather than a comment thread.
lol ok
It was really good, I wish to read more, you are a good writer and one day you will be a great writer, with less accidents or mistakes, misspellings aside, since you probably type fast when writing your stories!
I do type pretty fast, so the same misspellings happen often. but thats what spell check is for!
im really glad you enjoyed it. Im having such fun writing this!! but im currently working on my Fairy Tail fanfic so you should check that one out. Chapter one is done for now, and im... Show more
Now that I am re-reading Kvistr, I noticed Alanna is wearing animal hide. I belive elves don't use animals to make things, or to eat. Is it a mistake on your part, something I fail to understand, or something that you failed to explain? I am much confused
Even though elves dont hunt, traders still come through Ellesmera so they are ale to buy the hides. plus, animal hide pants are more fashionable than fabric. Its also tougher so its better for Rider training. Sorry, did i not explain?
no x3 It's okay though
I LOVED that series Melissa and was sad when the Inheritance cycle ended. I love that you picked up where they left off. Now I have to tell my brother (Another Inheritance cycle fan) about you series so he can read it too!
great! Oh, and I have an Inheritance Cycle group. You shoul join! its been inactive ever since I created it, but you should still join!
lol I am on the second book in Inheritance cycle series, so im finally getting the idea x3
.3. Im surprised I remember the amount of eggs but not the amount of Eldunari .3.
i dont remember either number. all i remember was it was a shit-ton. eragon doesnt have to worry about lost knowledge because of the eldunari, and saphira isnt pressured to breed because of the eggs. its an ideal situation.
.3. yerp (yes) :3
Please write the next book. Please.
Yesssss! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Ah, I am not a fan fix girl, I can do them in my head, but as soon as I try to put it on paper, everything goes blank. I am trying to get certain fan fics work, and it is taking forever for me.
Same here
mellissa your good realy good at writting
i wish i could be detaled as you i have bad explaining my imagination since most of it doesnt make sense to me
You might want to edit the keywords you still have the brother's dragon on the list.
Oh, right. thanks, nala!
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