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READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left because they were scared. But that night they all died because of their friend. He killed them for making him sleep in that house if you don't send this to 11 comments you will die tonight by Jerry. Example 1: A man named Stewart read this and didn't believe it. He shut off his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door. He got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: a girl named Haley read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to now if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments Jerry will 'visit' you his isn't fake. Apperently if you copy and past this to ten comments in the next ten minuets you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. You will either get kissed or asked out, if you brake this chain you will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. In the next 53 minuets someone will say I love you or I'm sorry

Well what can I possibly say that hasn't already been written! I'll repeat myself by saying that your work is always of the highest class and with great attention to emotional detail. I've read other stories by you along similar lines so I'm pretty sure that if you import them here your readers will be in for a real treat.

What a fantastic story. Your writing skill and the imagery you have displayed is truly a craft!!!
Belinda

I loved your story:) I definately think there should be a sequel!!!

What an imagination, superb

Just returned to read the last pages. Truly awesome story. Not sure if I've commented before but loved the artistic and intelligent writing that just kept me turning the pages.

Thanks for this great read.

gud story.

Beautiful imagery, and a fascinating take on what seems to be several ancient mythologies woven together. Well done, indeed!

I finished your story, as promised.
Words, per se, are in themselves dull, but you managed to take words, and as a master weaver, turn them into a visually fantastic short story; and so poetic.
If ever a flesh and bone finger were able to touch pure emotion, this would be the time.
You got my vote.
Laz