BookRix

awesome book

This is, without question, the best work of fan fiction I've ever read, and honestly, I'm not a big fan of, well, fan fiction. Your story, however, has changed my mind about that. I read the first part a while ago, but life being the distracting thing it is, I never got back to it until now, and having finally read this next chapter where Alice gets changed, I'm kicking myself for taking so long to return to it. So...when are you going to write more? Please do - this is excellent! Thank goodness I saved it to my favorites the first time. :)

can you continue the story!

that book was awesome! you did a great job on it.

I really liked it. Your a very good author and I could see everything in my head.
I'm going to have to try very hard to try and best this book.
Damn! You set a high challenge.

WOW! So,? you write well. Who does not like it?

a good imaginative piece.
Do keep writing you can only improve with practice.
You have the tools in your mind

nice alice is very i would say curious s oat the end with james watching her from the coutyard that made her even more curious bu she could not see him......oh yeah the reson this is so detailed is beacause i have the gift to see things when i read so i can see alice in the cell looking out the window eating the cake behing the sweet thing she allways was and is. the book is great is there another one???

you should write more about what happens to alice.

Ever11850

Nice book. Captures my attention. I like it!