The Suicide

By:
jacki137
User: jacki137
The Suicide
Flash fiction contest
October - December 2012

All he wanted to do was die, and all he could do was keep dying.....over and over again.











































































  • Drama
  • 420 Words
  • Ages 12 and up
  • 764
  • 16
  • Publication Date: 10-30-2012
Keywords: 
flash fiction, drama, suicide, hell
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A.Harlow
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A.Harlow

Short but very good- I did not see that twist appear my eyes, well done you have my vote ;)

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Deleted User

Oh wow... didn't see that twist coming. I like it. Dark, well written, and surprising!

S.P. Johnson Jr.
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S.P. Johnson Jr.

I love it. So Twilight Zone. Just enough story to deliver the snap.
Also recalls "A Thousand Deaths" by Orson Scott Card.

epoch1
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epoch1

I had to come back and vote on this one. It's a top 10 piece for sure.

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