...about this whole scary Halloween thing...ha ha.
I like your natural flowing comedic voice in this. It's the best comedy there is, when it's not forced and when it sits within the story as if it belongs there.
I had a little giggle at his thing dropping off after taking Viagra. It must have been the picture I had in my mind...
Overall I got a Tim Burton type of Corpse Bride image, which made it all the more easy to read.... Show more
I loved it! It was hilarious and interesting... and I love the severed arm XD
There was a charm about that story along with your legendary professionalism. Nice touch.
I love zombies, but even if I didn't, I still would have enjoyed your story. There was absolutely nothing unusual about the first few pages, which was a nice lead up to the sudden "it was starting to flake and rot". Even though the title gives things away, I still really appreciated the set up!
A great alternative to the usual vampire pap we read...I loved this one. I also loved drive-in movies, so this really took me back to the good old days.
As usual, you combine humor with skill - and weaved a tale that even I could stomach, despite the gory snacks.
As your second unofficial editor, two tiny fixes needed:
nob should be knob
drought should be draught
That's all folks!!