Plz update message me when u update plz its going really goooooooooooooood!!!!!
updated!
Wow, this is great, I can't wait for you to update. You seem to understand the character and emotions exceptionally well which make it a fab read for me. Have you ever read Evermore, I really like the pencil bit toward the end of where you finished off as it reminded me of my favorite book. I also like how you abruptly described the male characters apperance, I know it may sound strange but I like how you descibed it almost... Show more
Evermore is a good series. I own all of them!
It is my fave book I have read it countless times and never tire of it, I think that book 2 was a little boring I suppose because I knew that Ever's freinds would rebel
As I've said (plenty times xp) you're a really great writer. I wish I had your talent. :(
You have amazing talent :D we're 2 different writers yes but we both have a unique and amazing tyle :)
style not tyle xD
lol. I like tyle better :p
The pace of the story is nice. I can really see the heart of the character, the heart of the author. Wonderfully done in the aspect. And besides needing a bit of editing, you're doing a wonderful job. Just keep writing!
---RbG