cool an english Warrior Cats book *-*
i have written an Warrior Cats Book too but in german ^^
very good ^^ looking forward to read more ^^
Just picked up a mistake on Chapter 2 and in the alliances.
Apprentices only go by the name 'paw'. So Threepaw, the elder in some clan I've forgotten needs a name change. Threefoot for example.
Medicine cats and leaders recieve prophecies, and the leader wouldn't just announce a prophecy to the whole clan. The leader knows that medicine cats read prophecies, as ordianry warriors don't have the power to do so.
Interesting plot so far, couple of typos here and there but overall it looks like it's going to make a good book. (Thankies for the dedication :D)
Again, if you need any help, drop me a message or Skype me, I can send you a example of any chapters or you can just read my stuff. (ForestClan is better) :p
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