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I always love stories about special people who can wield the elements. I actually am working on one like that now as well as having two others in mind to write. Your story is good, and I like it. I do however, have one suggestion and that is to break up the large block of text into manageable paragraphs especially the dialogue. It was not hard to read though but still is a recommendation. You have a well-paced story so far, so please continue. I;d be interested in seeing how this goes.