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This unfolds like a good movie. I could really see the action and the movement. (And that's the best thing for any writer to hear.) Your writing is very sharp and conveys the message quite well. Even though I am a romance writer I could still appreciate it, and you do have quite a bit of romancing as your character does get his needs satisfied.
Your short prequel excerpt hits the mark. Love every well formed detail. You've... Show more
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hope all my readers like my short prequel excerpt
thank you very much for the feedback and i appreciate the comments. I try my best to reveal the imagery of each character.
You're welcome. I'll add this to my favorites.