BookRix

It was awesome, Hope to read more of the story, Nice dialogues it flows really well, keep it going :)

hmm.interesting

Review - You had a good story going, moving nicely. Then it suddenly stops! I would be interested in seeing where this leads. Let me know when you have added to it. Good job. Robynn

the flow is really easy to follow, as well as the dialog. looking forward to reading more!

Love It you Should Fninsh It

That's a pretty good start. :-)

I really like how Orien is developing. Let me know when you write more!

so far so good, you should continue with this.

Yes! loving it please keep going I will be looking out for following chapters

great start let me know when you put up more