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If you want to know what kind of poet I am, read my melacholic poems in part 2 of this book, I'm happy to receive feedback....
Write a book with poems, when your heart is heavy!
With sincere regards
James
Hi, again you ask on your profile for recommended reading. Any of my book I would suggest. The love life of JJ Lacey is long and full of sex and is 189254 Words long. Reading the first four chapters will give you a taste of young sex. Chapter 6 will give you incest. Not sure what your sexual taste is, but now you are a friend you can explore mine, happy reading JJ Lacey
Hi just read half of your book. Liked the way you just jumped into it, with no pussy-footing about your telling it how it is. I thought it might actually be a true account of a true subway encounter. I like to write as if I'm recalling a memory, keep up the good work though I would suggest shorter separated Sentences and paragraphs would make it better reading! Just my thought, Have a nice day JJ
Welcome to my friend's list, I hope you enjoy my under the conter books???????
Hi Mayumi. I rewrote Rebecca using your advice. if you ever get a chance to look, i'd be interested in your opinion
Yes that's a great ending! I also liked the line thoughts of eternal..........was great.
I've read most Stephen King books but usually I just pick up a book and start reading. I know in the 1st 15 or 20 pages if I want to continue. What books have you read?
I like jack keroaque "on the road," Tim Winton, "Breath" are probably 2 that come to mind at the moment. also Ayn rand and the classic which reminds me of your writing John fowles The Magus , a masterpiece.
are you sure you are not john fowles in disguise?
Hi. You read darkness of light? I added the last chapter because after I edited out the mistakes I re-read it and the sad ending really depressed me, so I wrote a happy ending. Do you think that's weird?
Hi Brook. (is your name Brook or Mayumi?) I just wrote a short story if you are interested in giving me some feedback. The rise and fall of Sister Rebecca. Thanks. i hope your day is going well
wow, thanks for the comments, Mayumi. you answered perfectly what was good and bad points.i originally had in my mind that it would be a longer story, describing her feelings and emotions as she struggled with her beliefs and desires. i had an hour to spare this morning so i... Show more
Thanks Joseph, there is an Australian in my book.