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It took a little time to finish reading Trapped because I have a number of other books to read to keep up on my website but I thought I'd let you know what I think. It definitely has an interesting and enjoyable plot. While it intrigued me that Violet had born that burden of her curse for so long, it was a little odd how the demon was able hurt her directly, seemingly from outside her body, while she was fighting it, and still manage to retain control of her; but from the position of a young girl, it could be possible. There are numerous spelling and grammar mistakes through the story and the tense changes between past and present which disrupts the flow a little (I didn't go back and read it a second time to double check) but on the whole it was a nice story to read.

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