BookRix

No worries mate

what did you think of the way i left it
and yes i already have formulated the next book

I think you should write more I dieting to know what happen to jackson he seems like a hero and needs love.
I like forward to reading more plz let me know when you next write a book
Have a nice day

thanks for the feedback

Slob,blob

wow.

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XD

don't worry about it.

lol

Guys with silver tounges which in the olden days was the name or people who write stories would get all the women by talking only

lol ya i know

Cool
What are your thoughts on them?
As far as being to full on or not enough?

They are perfect, i like the police woman one personally

there is a couple more in the book but don't want to release to much till I put it up in full as a free read as it's finish as far as content just need to tidy it up before going to the editor which is what I hope the free read will allow people to give me feedback on what needs to be changed as far as content and length grammar and if the story flows alright

Thanks for the feedback

ask a girl out

I can't get the convo to load now
I'm sorry I don't remember laughing all i said was defiantly to the comment this will be fun

u and jimmy hurt me so bad it's not funny

Last night there was a scammer saying he was from the bank of Dubai and he had a important matter to descuss with about over a hundred of us terrible speller He spelt bothering as boardering lol

oh i had no clue thanks for the heads up

No worries

Well I suggest u trust ur gut feeling of who u let see ur work.

Sorry I never got to read it.