well you have really good hand in your writing ..... butt story is nt appealing ... sorry to say ......but you are platinum ... dnt stop ever ..........
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Fay
Thanks. I can agree that my books aren't everyone's "cup of tea" so I understand. I hope my other books will make up for this one.
behrozepervaiz
i hope too .... but neva stop ....
Fay
I wasn't thinking about it!
Hi, I am Fay, short for Faith, and I am a new writer on this website. Before I published my first book on this website, I read one of the romance books from one of the writers on this website. I really enjoyed it and I wanted to publish my boo I have been working on for months. The book is called, "This Time Won't You Save Me". Now, I am going to get back to writing that book. Please enjoy it. :)
More chapters coming later on today!