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I wrote this poem a while back.

“Whisper”
What shadows cast in that place
Does darkness reign or will light give chase?
All ears will know her secrets truth,
She cares not old or in your youth.
What reason does she dare to give
why she takes some while others live.
Her breath traces the wind in flight
Some let her come while others fight.
We give her license when we war
And her breathless whisper becomes a roar.
Each day she spreads her spindly hand
and casts her shade across the land.
She fills all space with silent breath
dissension until there is nothing left.
But she will not share that whispers light
she keeps it well beyond our sight.
For if we learned her secrets fright
She’ll meet her own eternal night.

Quit brooding. It doesn't fit you. You're the nice guy that every girl wants so just get over it and be who you are. I will see you soon anyway so I expect you to be ready to have some fun. It will be like old times. Until then keep writing and I will help with editing over dinner one night while I'm there. Let's work on The thing in the woods and Jamie's Journal. That way you can go ahead and publish like everyone keeps telling you to do. I can't believe someone that writes as well as you is reluctant to publish. Do you realize how many people here on bookrix would give anything to have your writing talent?

Hey, are you being mean to people here on bookrix?

I do not know why you have not pushed to publish some of your work. I mean you do have revisions and editing to do but for raw writing it is incredible. You just need to finish your other stories and get them out there in front of people. I am especially interested to see where "Here Nor There" goes. Once you explained the synopsis to me I was very intrigued. I am going to be near you on a shoot for Macy's in a couple of weeks. I would love to meet up again and go out to do something fun. We can talk about your writing and I have friends in the publishing industry we can discuss. Or we can just have a good time like last time. Either way. Hope to see you soon.

Favorite Line

Never seraph spread a pinion
Over fabric half so fair!

Poe

My favorite poem

Annabel Lee
Edgar Allan Poe, 1809 - 1849

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea:
But we loved with a love that was more than love--
I and my Annabel Lee;
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsman came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me--
Yes!--that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we--
Of many far wiser than we--
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling--my darling--my life and my bride,
In her sepulchre there by the sea,
In her tomb by the sounding sea.

Um hey you told me you'll send the audiobook.

Something to consider...

http://www.writersdigest.com/writers-digest-competitions/self-published-book-awards

I don't know how to thank you, I really don't. I appreciate that you are helping me with my writings, I am fixing Mind Games, on my own, so please ignore the message I sent you about that - thank you, and I am explaining myself more, hopefully. I really do like the help, so any kind of feedback that you are willing to give me is accepted, positive or negative. Either one helps me become a better writer, and that's what I want to be, a better writer. Thank you for the help that you have already given me.