hey it's pj! I really like it so far hope you write more. I published two books ( 1.he hit me and it felt like a kiss 2. ultraviolence) and would mean a lot if you check them out thanks!
Your book? Is it a pome or are you trying to imitate Shakespeare? You need to attend to spacing and research your subject. What is a 'fortyard' As an old seaman I have heard of forepeak and a foredeck, there is a yardarm but that is on the mast. I'm sorry if this is not what you want to hear, but you did ask.
Please can everyone read and comment on the book the crimson sea and tell me what you think
I enjoy your company.. :)
Thanku i enjoy yours
where did you learn to write, or are you self taught
Self Taught
very good its dark stuff but hey with donald trump in charge its dark times
thank you for your feedback ill change the problems. A fortyard was how some vikings reffered to decks on massive ships called drakes, due to their large scale
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