That means so much to me, Happy! Yep, these 3.5 chapters are barely even a 1/4 of the book. I swear, I'll have to publish something else before I can publish this tome.

you have a great 1/4th-to 1/2 finished on this story - a solid foundation. Great work.

I am looking forward to see what choices Kira and the alien will choose to do next.What conflicts will lead them to the inevitable end.. Nice structure.. Beginning disaster.. and the impending 2 to 3 more disasters/conflicts created by the character's choices and the outcome from this chaos of existence.

Thank you so much! I'm doing my best to write as many as I can. :)

This is one of the best books i have rever read and i have read a lot, i do hope u make several more.

I'll update all chapters up to chapter 3 soon. A lot has changed, and anything past that has either not been fixed or not been written yet. :)I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

When are you going to update it?

:o it is so good

you should totely write more i ike thr alien SO much he seems like a gebtleman which is ironc considering most human men are ha ha lol

Of course it stopped at a plot changing moment too. Hope you have the rest of this available, if not, finish!! :)

As it is, this is a wonderful story that has kept me up reading later than anything has in quite a few years. While I tend to use fast paced action to keep my readers driving toward the end you've used a reflective curiosity, touching on real themes of concern in our modern existence. I stopped at chapter five but I'm finishing first thing in the morning! Keep writing excellently Stevie! :) RMH