I Love Mulan Also :)

FINISH PLEAS

Also you need to give credit to the original author. Because you could get sued by the original author (disney) if you tried to publish it or anything. but you still need to give credit to the original

umm. If your going to do something about the ariel movie you might want to slow down a little. put some depth and background into it. not just that she met a fish named flounder and they played and found a shark. Make it deeper, make it to where people can actually see what's happening. With this i can't picture the movie in my mind. :) Try to add a little more to it, no offense though your a Great writer just try to put some depth. What flounder looked like, what they were playing, how the shark came to them, etc... you know stuff like that :)

this is a short book part two should be chaper two!

this is a short book part two should be chaper two!

I loved this fairy tale, but I am into Mulan and Cinderella, not much of Snow White but I like Mulan. In 3rd grade I read about Mulan disguising herself as a man to fight in the war when the other warriors said girls weren't allowed to fight. I still love The Little Mermaid. (:

i said in the second book ill make more if ppl add me comment and love it and dont worry ill make more

I LOVE MY STORY AND YOU WILL TOO <3