coleenliebsch
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coleenliebsch

Great story!! Thanks for sharing it!!

lazarus67
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lazarus67

my first attempt at a spooky mystery.

JennaB.56
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JennaB.56

I remember reading this, very spooky and what a mystery.

judycolella
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judycolella

Amazing story, amazing author!

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Thanks Jude.
Can't believe I wrote that almost 5 years ago here.

judycolella
judycolella

That makes it a classic, I think!

lazarus67
lazarus67

I think I improved a bit since then. If I would have the patience I would rewrite some of it...or add more detail.

kylerjames
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kylerjames

10000

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Yes...10,000 and not 1,000. Makes a huge difference...lol.

JennaB.56
JennaB.56

yes I must say it does Laz... Happy writing!

Rashmi
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Rashmi

Very well written story. Loved it. A great bakance between thriller amd romance. Great job. Hoping to see more of your writings.

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Thanks for commenting. I have many many stories. Most shorter than this one.

deadpool
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deadpool

how do you download a book?

Heat1113
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Heat1113

Great book. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

anjana
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anjana

hell

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Hell?

Chris-Jean
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Chris-Jean

I loved this story, Laz, and truly believe you will have a lot of buyers, myself included, for this story.

Not only is it very well crafted, but I also applaud you for cleverly interweaving (showcasing) your other work into the body of the story. Kudos!

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Thanks . It's been a while since I read it. Need to see if it needs editing. Then I'll decide if I'll put it up for sale.

Chris-Jean
Chris-Jean

I will just watch this space then. :)

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