I liked this story... A lot!
Good short story. Held my interest although I guessed the ending. I enjoy anything interesting and easy to read.
https://youtu.be/9HUCImbsX5Q hey guys plz click on link & watch my short film m playing lead on that ,this story written by me also ....its performance oriented
Review - Janice Abel suggested this read on The Reading List and I cam over to check it out. She has excellent tastes!
This was a gritty, quick moving, sarcasm laced crime story. Written well, and I enjoyed it. I'm assuming by the fine writing you know your punctuation, and it was lost in the transfer to BookRix. Outside of that little glitch, very good writing and a nice story. Excellent job. Robynn
https://youtu.be/9HUCImbsX5Q hey guys plz click on link & watch my short film m playing lead on that ,this story written by me also ....its performance oriented