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njoyabl

Great short story. I'll keeping checking for more from you.

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Linda

I liked this story... A lot!

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aditya singh

https://youtu.be/9HUCImbsX5Q hey guys plz click on link & watch my short film m playing lead on that ,this story written by me also ....its performance oriented

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Robert

I enjoyed this story

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Deleted User

I like it.. :)

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mama read

Good short story. Held my interest although I guessed the ending. I enjoy anything interesting and easy to read.

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aditya singh

https://youtu.be/9HUCImbsX5Q hey guys plz click on link & watch my short film m playing lead on that ,this story written by me also ....its performance oriented

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Deleted User

I have to agree with the rest of the readers here,this short story book is very good, but i think it should be longer because of course it leaves you hanging. :)

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Deleted User

Very enjoyable, sir. You put it together quickly and neat, then deliver it hot! I like your style (and wish I could do the same - LOL).

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Rgabel

Review - Janice Abel suggested this read on The Reading List and I cam over to check it out. She has excellent tastes!

This was a gritty, quick moving, sarcasm laced crime story. Written well, and I enjoyed it. I'm assuming by the fine writing you know your punctuation, and it was lost in the transfer to BookRix. Outside of that little glitch, very good writing and a nice story. Excellent job. Robynn

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shunya

Hey, I read your book and it was really interesting. I like your sarcasm. The crimeszene was really good described and i like the characters. Benally and Danny are great.

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luciaannie

Very simple story

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