Love the plot for the story and it just sucked me into its relam. Love it great job!!

Hi and thanks, I am continuing to write my book with dialogue on separate lines and I will change what I have written before as well. In the information, I wanted to give the people who don't really know about the Bermuda Triangle stories a background image but I understand what your saying

I love the story plot! I think when reasearching something or an event, DONT use ALL the real facts, use your imadgination and play it up a bit. Over all I think its good! Heres a tip someone passed to me, Put diolog on seperate lines, makes it easier to read and less confusing! Keep it up and I hope to read for from you soon! THanks!

Hi, Thanks alot from your comments..

I agree with yezall, you have a good story line that is well worth developing. May I give you some advice I received in college from one of my English professors. "When you do research, you will find all kinds of great things that are interesting but DO NOT belong in your research paper." Good luck with your story.

You will most likely hear from others about the mechanics of your writing. I focus on story line. Yours holds interest and I think its something you should continue to develop.