i know how do go from just finding out you were pregnant to the baby was born that makes no since and not everyone from the hood talks like that

Yeah, I get where you're coming from the story may not be the best work but think about it like this: I didn't bother making sure my grammar was correct because I was a fairly new writer and I was being lazy. Also I was only 14 when I wrote this so whatever is in the story is all from my imagination. Oh, and Although not everyone in the hood speak the way I portrayed them to speak in my story then forgive me, but where I live that's how we speak so I used the slang and terms we use or used back in 2011. Now I'm old enough to know right from wrong especially when it comes to having proper grammar.

well thanks for explaining it to me and showing your point of view