BookRix

What a lovely story of friendship. It deserved to win, you told the story really well.

I have always liked your writing ...definitely goin to read it...for sure its gonna to be gud

This is me thumping your back as Kat's was. I don't know what to say- I felt like I was at the foaling.

Bohot aala! ;)

You are very dear'
There is no one writing out there quite like you'
I'm a strong supporter'

Mario William Vitale

rochelle...i am grateful for your wonderful feedback...wonderful friends such as Val and good constructive feedback from wonderful people like yourself ,Kathy and Bek,Patrick,Junie and Paula have made it so interesting to be productive and involved on bookrix. thank you so much.

This is a nice story. I like the uniqueness of your book cover. Great layout, too!

for taking out the time to read and constructively criticise...i shall definitely read up on using the "Comma" effectively..oh and thank you for appreciating the art work in the book..yes,he is indeed very,very talented,and kind enough to take out the time to help with my work..he's a physician too so talented he is indeed. cheers bek!

Hi Dr Wardha,

I am sorry I couldn't get to your story in time for your contest.

I like the cover art and the page backgrounds.

I like the fast pace in your opening. A bit of repetition. I like the name--Sable. I like your narrative voice. Some reading up about comma use would benefit the story.

I think you have 'shown' your story in all the right places. And, 'told' in all the right places.

Good luck for your contest,

PS. I simply adore the front cover and when I realised your friend is responsible I just wanted to add that again. Please tell him he is very, very talented.

With regards,

Bek :)

Nice story and loved the lay out.
Sherry