I would love to know what happens next
already I'm in love with this book and I love how you used Niall as one of the characters are you a Directioner?
Thank you:) Yes I am a Directioner. I love One Direction a lot so I used them as my characters :)
nice
When I read through the story, I could feel the heart wrenching pain that once occupied my heart. Silently suffering, my heart looked for a friend. Searching for a friend, I took to writing. Words became my friend. Only during the time I travel I meet friendly eyes that helped me come out of my loneliness and enjoy life as it is. Thanks for sharing this story. Your story brims with soft emotions that could trickle a tear at once.
Thank you for your heart touching comment. Reading this comment makes my day. ^_^ It makes me inspired to write more stories in the future.
This book is quite amazing. I love it. I would suggest checking your word choice and grammar. But aside from that, it's a great story. I hope you write more to it. :)
^_^ Thank you for your comments and suggestions. :) Can you tell me some of my grammar mistakes so that I could edit or change it?
Well, in many instances, your sentences seem a bit jumbled together or unfinished. You have some words missing from sentences here and there. If I think of any more, I'll let you know. Also, if you'd like someone to edit your story, I'd be more than willing to do so. I've edited... Show more
Thank you for your help. Okay, you can edit my story. I'll send you the first chapter :) ^_^
Alright. :)
Hi. I read your story and it has a wonderful message of hope and love. A strong main character and subject. You talk about her emotions really well.
I was wondering if English was your second language. Because there were several areas that need to be addressed.
If so I would suggest using a free editor. Ginger is a good one to use to help clean up your words so that the story flow smoothly. http://www.gingersoftware.com/
If... Show more
Thank you so much for your comments and a helpful software which I am happily using now. It really improves my grammar and sentence structure.
It is now helping me in the other stories I've written. I would like to ask if you know other helpful free software besides ginger... Show more
I have a few online editors you could use. They have helped me and I hope they will help you as well. Check out the links below. Good luck and let me know when you have one ready to go, I'll give it a read.
http://prowritingaid.com/
http://editminion.com/
Thank you for all your help. Sure I'll tell you if I already have another written story.
omg, Love this. Like I feel like that all the time.. Gahh Write more!
Dear Theroselily13,
Super sorry for the late reply. I just recently opened my BookRix account a few days ago because I forgot my password. Thank you so much for your comment it inspires me a lot to write more stories. I appreciate it a lot. Thank you again. When you said, you... Show more
Thank you so much :)