BookRix

It would be nice to live forever...:)

wow nice 1 this should be the next twilight saga

good book

It is a good book,but it needs to be corrected grammaticly, but dot take that too hard. I am being raised to be a very educated person, so I am used toeeding, and reading, perfection. So you could have givin us a little more info, but his really great potential!!!!

i am writing a sequel to this book it should be out very soon

A great story..thank you for sharing..Mari

hey
the story was good but there should be more!!! please tell me if you write more to this story... x

it was ok

It was short but still good and as another person said why would edward say "As I love you I hope" They are married they love each other and it needed a little bit more fist in it!!!!!!!!!!

It was a little short but it gave me some informatoin keep up the good work!!!!!!!