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I enjoyed your work. over all I felt the writing was good. It got the point across and each poem briefly told a short story. I like that. I'd really like to see you use a bit more imagery though. :) I think some of these poems (already being good) would be even better if you could paint a more vivid scene/scenario for the reader. I wish you luck in this contest and I look forward to reading more from you! :)

Lauren