BookRix

You have a way with words, that could easily be translated into powerful songs. I believe your talent should put you within the upper ranks of the Poetry contest.

Robin

How about checking out my book of winter poems and voting on it?

Salvatore Buttaci

Great poems! I like the honest way you tell them, which is for me a prerequisite to poetry writing: they must come from the heart. You got my vote!

I enjoyed this. Keep writing. Gave you a vote. =-) Good luck!!!

I love your poetry. Nice work.

I like your poetic style! It is as if you've taken memories and broken them down symbolically and poetically. You've successfully conveyed emotions,memories,ideas,thoughts and several vibrant words as poetry that has to be felt as much as it's read. I can see the work that you've put into this and I appreciate your grammar,spelling and punctuation - making this book an enjoyable and easy read.

Thank you for sharing and God Bless,

Tyrone

I liked your work but there are a few things that bothered me about it in a literary way. Your endings on most of the poems slumped and lay dangling like a thought train disappearing around a corner. There were a few poems that managed to do a remarkable wrap up to how the tale started. Keep it focused and your will be famous some day. Leonard Cohen did it and so can you. You have the talent to become a Bard - a poet of great merit.

Interesting mix of Greek mythology and childhood stories, I must say. My favorite was Morning War. I really liked the rhythm and element of surprise in your poems.

bang, bang. you shot me down.

Hi Timothy,
I enjoyed your book. It was filled with pretty dark poetry layered with a touch of humor. A chimney getting the "flue" is very topical
given all the swine flu headlines.
Keep on writing!
Peace,
Dennis