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Well Done.You were able to capture the essence of it all and I could almost feel as if I was right there.It made me smile.Light-hearted, pure and just a good read.

Very amusing, with a lightly flowing ironic sense of humour.

Bravo, Timmi, you stepped back into your fourteen-year-old voice like a pro. And this pulled me in beside you, allowing me to be the same age and seeing everything from your view point. I enjoyed your voice, your choice of words (a few typos here and there, or misspelled words), but the story stayed solid. Thanks for sharing. Too, I've been in Victoria Station, and it is massive. I've also experienced rides in your black mafia taxis in London. I loved London, but the food was TERRIBLE. Again, good work, here. A vote is deserved. Elizabeth

Entertaining, just how a 14-year-old boy would see things.
Stinky, smelly, gross, vomit--that's Amore!!!

Hi Timmi, love the style of this story. Turning a near disaster into a comedy, could only be done through the eyes of a small boy. They see no danger.

This was well written even though the spelling was off here and there. I also struggle with mild dyslexia so, this can be forgiven by me at least. If you do as I do and get someone to read it before publishing, I'm sure they will be able to catch the offending words. Well done I've saved it to my favs and voted.

I enjoyed your humor.
kathy

And as a 14 year boy u were courageous enough....to undertake that journey...

I voted for it enjoyably..

I liked it and it made me laugh a lot..specially the instances of your survival and support in the boat...It is difficult to write comedies..I feel so...You had written it...SO I would say great job....

It is good to laugh in the face of disaster! it makes for a much more interesting journey in life.. I have added to my kept books and voted - Paula

I took the liberty to add this to the group HUMOROUS WRITINGS./joeparente
You can promote the book here also./joe