Bizzy

By:
terrex
User: Terrex
Bizzy
Bizzy has always been on the run from his past and now that it's catching up to him who will be the hero that saves him from the people that want him captured or dead.

  • True Crime
  • 1430 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 895
  • 17
  • Publication Date: 04-21-2013
Keywords: 
True Crime
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H︀e︀r︀e ︀s︀h︀e︀ ︀i︀s︀:︀ ＷＷＷ.ＩＮＴＩＭＣＯＮＴＡＣＴ.ＣＯＭ?_ebook-terrex-corbin-bizzy

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The length of the chapter is fine. The problem is, all the suggestions I and others gave you, are never applied to your stories.

So, all I will say is this:

You have a story of a man living a harsh life and a hero who I think we will see in the coming chapters.

But the writing is as usual, in need of lots of work.

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H︀e︀r︀e ︀s︀h︀e︀ ︀i︀s︀:︀ ＷＷＷ.ＩＮＴＩＭＣＯＮＴＡＣＴ.ＣＯＭ?terrex_1366546356.1609179974

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