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Patty, I found this story very compelling, the moral laid out in CAPITAL letters. This story is so true to life, and I'm sure the basis of it has been carried out in different versions everywhere. You kept the story flowing nicely. If I might suggest anything that would enhance it even further would be to put the conversations outside the paragraph inclusions. A job well done. You deserve a vote for such a composite picture of reality. Elizabeth
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It is sad how gossip destroys so many young lves and it so needs to be stopped for it doesnt discriminate against any certain people it takes at will .
