This was really cool! You have a talent with words! Hugs!
Thank you. I tried my best to capture the essence of dragons in popular folklore and stories. They can be fierce but as I have heard, also have a noble spirit as well. But then, stories of them vary depending on what kind one is talking about.
Not quite understanding all your comments, sorry. The first "poem" is more like a poetic story or poem/story, whatever one prefers to call it. It is sorta a hybrid of the two. I agree that the second one is better, however I thought the first one to be different than my usual so I decided to include it. The first one however, I decided to rate it PG-13 for obvious reasons as it is not exactly what I would consider positive.... Show more
Thanks for all your comments and for those who have starred this piece. I appreciate it very much.
I like the second poem very well as an intoroduction to the story.
In fact you could go on as a narrative told by a minsteral as it had been told to him by one who became 'dragon master' at a young age by befriending an unlucky dragon, but I would drop the verse and just tell the story.
