What if...it's the end of the world.

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What if...it's the end of the world.
What if this poem is awesome?
What if this poem tries to be so highly philosophical that it's just stupid rubbish?

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Will you give your life
To save everyone around
When the darkness breaks
The universe down

  • Poetry
  • 441 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 429
  • 2
  • Publication Date: 05-20-2011
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gooduklady
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gooduklady

A good effort, but unfortunately I could not really follow the meaning in your poem. Also not too certain how it lends itself to the theme of END OF THE WORLD.

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