Serena - downloaded your Secrets book and put it on what I call my roulette wheel to be read. Without a doubt it is one that grabbed me more than any of the others and I finished the book again. As I got into it I did think, it went too fast. I thought Sara accepted what her grandmother said too soon. I realize she showed her pictures to convince her about Michaelbut in my mind that should have been held back for a time. A... Show more
Sereni,
The book cover is beautiful. This is a very good story that you have written. It kept my attention from beginning to end. And with a twist.
Excellent writing!
Review - Quick, sound character development. Engaging story plot. Set up well. Twist ending. Did I miss anything? Oh yes, your 'voice'. You always are able to imbue your characters with so much personality. Love your little prose here and there. I traveled quite a bit through LAX for business in Hollywood and LA and you did a great job of quick, precise descriptions. Over all, a great job, as always. Robynn
looking at the comments already made, there's little I can add... except that, even in your brief denouement, you found a way to put another twist into the very last line.
Very, very good story and excellent construction.
Vote, heart and comment - I'd do more if it were legal.
I came back when the voting thread opened...let me add this; you sat and developed character and plot with a real author's vision for imagining a real world, a select group thrown into a crucible, and a solution to a very nasty problem:) I was impressed. Excellent job, Sereni. Writing quality is NOT easy, and you succeeded.
Thanks for taking the time to read it.
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