BookRix

Good luck in the contest. You've got a good story and you could always expand it into a full length novel if you wanted to. :)

yeah, I think this was a heart touching book, and writing more would probably make it even better :)

This is a good book but can you write more on this which would make an even better book... thanks :)

I read this a day ago, but I wasn't able to answer (had to go to bed)....

This story definately deserves my vote, as you've done well with catching my feelings.

Thank you, Shaylah.
Your description drew me in to the story, and took me on an emotional journey.
Chris