I like the idea it is out there; like a quote I've just read from Marsha84 in Corey's book, about 5 puppies digging a whole under a fence and taking a walk in the wide wide world.
This is you taking a walk in the rest of the vast literary world that we have not yet ventured towards- bravo.
However spend a little extra time going through grammar to make sure your fans are not distracted by slight errors.