The Natural Order

The story of Jacob, Rachel and Leah. By:
razilber
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The Natural Order
Mystery suspense short story of Jacob, Rachel and Leah set in modern day DC.

  • Short Story
  • 4566 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 700
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 10-25-2009
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Jacob, Leah, Rachel
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meadowsislands
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meadowsislands

very interesting modern day interpretation of what seemed to be the story of Isreal. I guess you were going for a PG 13 rating with the swearing of the officer. The rebirth experience at the end was quite hopefull. I enjoyed all your intricate details. This was a great short story. Thanks!

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