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Nice introduction, it could have been put on the intro page. Now where is the story? Come on, you got a great start so why not finish it? Lots of luck.
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Start was so so but the train scene was good just wished it continue, lots of potential as girl seems to like to fuck and has plot options open in story. Keep writing.
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Dude where the book right now? Its say it cannot be founf i a click the link
Great story, read this story next to shake yourself wet! https://myfreekindle.blogspot.com/2017/09/jennifer-foor-letting-go-mitchell.html
How did you get to read?