Patrick,
This is a very interesting and wonderful story. It is so hilarious, I could not stop laughing and crying when I read certain parts.
You have a way with words. For example: “we screamed bloody murder and lit out like three Bambis for the safety of the cabin”. I really enjoyed this. You have written a masterpiece.
Excellent writing!
It was wonderful story! Very detailed. I could picture everything going on and I loved every minute of it. It reminds me of when I use to go on vacation with my family and go camping. :) Great job!
Brings back memories of when my sister and I would vacation at my grandparents cabin on Long Lake in Michigan, and the friends we met in the neighboring cabins...those were great times...
Nicely written and perfectly edited; a very enjoyable read.
As usual, you've crafted a charming, funny, delight of a story. I wish I could read every story with the ease that I can read yours. You're a master story-teller, no doubt about it :)