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omg what a good book a i enjoyed reading it

Beautiful story. My heart was being ripped apart with confusing emotion's. Utter doomed sadness and complete overwhelming joy at the same time. A piece of perfection, loved every word.

Oh My Sweet Cherry Pie. AMAZING Book. No Words Can Describe It. Veryy Well Written And Descripitive. I Could Feel What Lenny Was Going Through As he Lost His Daughter. And I'm A Girl. Very Very Much Commendment. AMAZING.

I felt him as he walked with his daughter and then alone. Your work allowed the reader to completely follow him with his vision and his feelings. Fantastic!

This is really good- I don't have time to finish but I will come back and read some more of your stories! You are really talented :D

read this story until you won the contest but it has spurred me on to read your other books.

This is an outstanding writing.

You have a nice style about you.
Well done for this
Wendyxx

An amazing story! The character’s emotion wasn’t only narrated, but it was beautifully shown. You have the talent to write a good novel. Keep it up!

This is a well-written short story. You have a realistic concept, but it was beautifully illustrated. The narration and dialogues were good. For me, you deserve to be in the top ten. Thumbs up!