Noemi -- First, my abject apologies for letting your "First Look" submission sit for FOUR weeks. I guess it was a matter of the right hand not knowing what the left was doing. Again, sorry!
As for the story: This certainly has the potential to be extremely funny if you do it right; just the blurb and pitch had me grinning (insert "be" between "must thrown" in second line of pitch).
I absolutely love parodies! My imagination is... Show more
Noemi -- First, my abject apologies for letting your "First Look" submission sit for FOUR weeks. I guess it was a matter of the right hand not knowing what the left was doing. Again, sorry!
As for the story: This certainly has the potential to be extremely funny if you do it right; just the blurb and pitch had me grinning (insert "be" between "must thrown" in second line of pitch).
I absolutely love parodies! My imagination is already revving up wondering how you're going to develop "the romance". I'm ready, let's have the rest.
'...battling their throbbing, puckering, pouting urges'. This has got to be good.
