My Green Treasure

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My Green Treasure
As a child, Patrick was jealous from the other kids, because they have their own tree house in their backyard. He always asks his dad but he says no to him. but luckily, they move out to another home where he found a tree in the backyard. how he will build the tree house?

  • Nature
  • 1192 Words
  • Ages 6 and up
  • 744
  • 8
  • Publication Date: 05-24-2013
Keywords: 
funny, aimfull, entertaining
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judycolella
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judycolella

What a sweet and wonderful story! For someone whose native language isn't English, you did a marvelous job of translating it, and even with the differences in syntax, you managed to make the tale easy to read and desirable to finish. This would be beautiful in any language, as it not only reveals a good heart, but has a very wise moral at the end.

Great job!

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naji.kadri
naji.kadri

thanks judycoella. Im very happy that you like it.

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angamonkey
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angamonkey

This could use some work with syntax and grammar and spelling but it was a very cute story :D good job.

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