the three witches

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the three witches
three witches.they saves the world by good magic.The opposite side is bad with dark powers.they want to kill all the innocent people and rule the world .

i will update it more.after reading please comment

  • Fairy Tale
  • 1120 Words
  • Ages 10 and up
  • 492
  • 14
  • Publication Date: 02-14-2015
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✿Jamy✿
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✿Jamy✿

Nice and amazing book!
Good imagination and work of thought!
Love the plot and story so far!
Hope you write more and the story needs editing as there are a lot grammar mistakes and all!

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♥Addo♥
♥Addo♥

tnx!!!!!

✿Jamy✿
✿Jamy✿

You're welcome :)

♥Addo♥
♥Addo♥

:)

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Deleted User

u need to edit a lot!!!!lots of spelling error nd needs more collaboration.......maybe u can start with explaining feeling!
btw good start nd hope u to carry on!

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♥Addo♥
♥Addo♥

ya.will soon.busy of homework so couldnt update it.

Deleted User

ikr!!!!!nd sure.......

♥Addo♥
♥Addo♥

:)

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Deleted User

its a good start addo.................carry on nd update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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♥Addo♥
♥Addo♥

thanks for adding my book on your favourite.

Deleted User

ur wc:)

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