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This little story was powerful and allowed me emotions I had long forgotten. Nice, nice, nice

I like the flow of your writing.
I like if you write more to this.

With this type of talent in the hands of the youth, the future of the written word is secure. Amazing writing!

Aww. It was really nice. To be truthful, it sound like my writing and I'm not lying. The discription, the emotion, the spelling and wording. That takes tallent. Not like I have any.

This is amazing. It's so short, but there's so much emotion, and the story is great. I wish I knew more, though. About the man and his daughter, and of course the narrator.

Are the man and his daughter in any way connected to his muse mentioned in the beginning?

Amazing... Just, amazing!

Exquisite! You managed to tell a riveting story in a few words. I didn't want it to end. Wonderfull work.

This is the second story of yours I just read...and again...your words mezmerize. And...again, I don't know what to say...except...unique.

I really was touched by this story.

I only wish I knew just a little more about the connection that made him turn away in shame.

Beautiful story even without an explanation for that mysterious connection.